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I do not agree some people say that children should not use smartphones or
tablet computers.
First, children can increase their motivation to look forward to smartphones
and tablet computers.
As a result, children can raise their exam scores.
Second, everyone has electronic devices, and you are the only one who does
not have them.
In that case, you won't be able to understand everyone's topic and
information.
For these reasons, I do not agree that some people say that children should
not use smartphones or tablet computers.
I do not agree (A) that children should not use smartphones or tablet
computers.
First, children can increase their motivation to look forward to smartphones
and tablet computers. (B) For example,
As a result, children can raise their exam scores.
Second, (C) today most adults have their own electronic devices, (D)
therefore
In that case, (E)
For these reasons, I do not agree (A) that children should not use
smartphones or tablet computers.
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