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22年度第1回筆訂 4 Write an ssay given TOPIC. Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. .Suggested length: 120-150 words answer sheet. Write your essay in the space provided on Side B of your Any writing outside the space will not be graded. TOPIC Should people's salaries be based on their job performance? POINTS ⚫Age Spend 2 Go fishin Company profits Motivation C . Skills 3 K 生産性が上がる→会社の利益につながる 多くのお金を得る。 barinqon gni 社員とする→お金をもらうため。 1 Her 2 Her 3. She borilep Show and worker IS E スキルをもつため。 TI by 1990sm or so of togiot H S No. 11 1 Shanti soli jon bib ogni giring. E.M

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間で 7 英語の授業で、「今後、服を手放す際に、どのような手段を選ぶか」についの をすることになりました。 それに向けて、次の(条件)に合うよう、あなたの い。 条件 ①下の内の四つの手段から一つを選ぶこと。 . を参考にして書いてもよい。 なぜその手段を選ぶのかという理由も書くこと。 ③ まとまりのある5文程度の英語で書くこと ・売る ・他の人にあげる . 寄付する の間 間で 兄弟姉妹や友だちにあげる) (例: *フリーマーケットやオンラインで売る) の間 慈善団体に寄付する) ・リサイクルに出す (例:リサイクルのためにお店に持って行く [注] *フリーマーケット=flea market

英検二級ライティングの要約問題を採点してください！ 回答：These days, some university students choose to join short-term. By doing so, they can know about companies ... 続きを読む

以下の英文を読んで、その内容を英語で要約し, 解答欄に記入しなさい。 語数の目安は45語~55語です。 解答は, 解答用紙のB面にある英文要約解答欄に書きなさい。 なお, 解答欄の外 に書かれたものは採点されません。 解答が英文の要約になっていないと判断された場合は, 0点と採点されることが あります。 英文をよく読んでから答えてください。 University students often plan for their future careers by attending job fairs or searching online for information about different kinds of work opportunities. There are other ways, too. Some of them choose to join short-term work programs at companies called internships. These have some good points. Students will be able to know more about companies they are interested in, such as what kind of jobs there are and what kind of people are working there. Also, internships allow students to get to know other students. These students can encourage each other both during and after the internship. On the other hand, if students choose to join very short internships, they may not be able to understand the job they are doing before the internships end. Also, students who take part in internships may find it difficult to do well in their studies.

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4. (scòlded/ was / the teacher / who/bèing/by) in this room at that ume! 5. (be / the / going/is/moved/ cupboard to ). 6. (was/by/ kitten/rolled a ball / being/the) then. 5 次の英文を日本語に直しなさい。 に注目。 過去 進行形の受動 態。 5. cupboard 食器棚 6. kitten 子猫 1. Both English and French are spoken in Canada. to Tom mid bespele 1094 0 2. Many surveillance cameras are equipped in this building. 3. Parking is not allowed here. 4. Where were those cars manufactured? 5. This song used to be sung by young people. 2. surveillance camera 監視カメラ equip 設置する bhow'an 4. manufac 製造する BMOW blo 6. Your homework will have been done by tomorrow. 6. 未来 CHALLENGE! 次の日本語を英語に直しなさい。 ただし, 受動態を使うこと。)anoy 1. テレビは誰によって発明されたのですか。 (invent) 2. その犬は彼女によって飼われている。 3. その部屋は掃除されているところだ。 gt beveiled A ミスに注意! 下線部に誤りがあるものを選び, 訂正しなさい。 A strange message appeared while the software is being installed. (a). (b): (c). (d)

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When students go to university, they usually go to the campus and take classes in classrooms with other students. However, there are other types of classes for students to take. Some of them take online classes from home without going to the campus. What are some benefits of this? Online classes are helpful for students living far away from the campus because they do not need to travel for long periods of time. Moreover, in the case of recorded online classes, students can watch recorded classes over and over again so that they can understand the classes better. However, some students may have problems with their computers or their Internet connection during online classes. This can make it difficult to take the classes smoothly. Also, if students do not go to the campus, they will have fewer chances to see each other face-to-face and talk to other students. Because of this, some students may feel lonely.

英検２級のライティングの添削をお願いしたいです💦 書きたい内容↓ 一つ目　小説ファンに人気があるなぜなら、小説のキャラクターが動いているのをみれるからと映画が面白いか面白くないか評価できるから。 二つ目　収入も大切な要素 　　　　小説はファンに知られていて世界中で読ま... 続きを読む

TOPIC These days, many novels are turned into movies. Do you think the number of such movies will increase in the future? POINTS Image Income Quality

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you. I think so. I have two reasons. First, they can hearing from lose their weights. By doing this, they will move easily. Second They are able to have great time because exercising make them happy. That's why I think people bught to exercise more for their health

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I'd love to ride your electric bicycle! How much is it? And What color is it? About your questions, I think electric bicycles will become more popular in the future. This is because electric bicycles make riding up hills comfortably. I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

この場合、online storeは単数ですか？複数ですか？このように数が明確でない時いつも迷うので見分け方も教えてください🙏

(I relieve time, to use computers. / I think so. I have two reasons. First, they will students ought to have more Use online store because they can buy everything anywhere. Second, They will send gift on cell phones because it's easy and they don't have to go out. Therefore I think people will spend more money on cell phone I think so. I have two reasons. First

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I think çont have two reasons. First, cell phones are so expensive. I think it will be more expensive in the future. Second, they will buy two cell phones For example, they are able to use bussiness or •useful. Therefore I think people will spend more money on cell phone in the future private. It's