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I'm going to talk about an experience that changed my life Was when I studied studying abroad in Niseko, Hokkaido. I stayed for a total of 2 months last summer I made a lot of friends. and this summer. Speaking in both Japanese and English deepened our bond. Even after studying abroad we l are still in touch. We are going to have a reunion in Tokyo on Christmas Actually, I hadn't been good at English before I studied abroad. A friend of mine said "Don't be afraid ". Then to me •get rid of my weakness in English. I had a conversation with my I was able to native teacher in English through the activitities. In these activities, had a We did BBQ, cooked, and went sightseeing. It was d again, I would like to go skiing. lot of fun. If I could study abroad in Niseko to Niseko. You can enjoy Niseko's lifestyle Please yo m

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A. Complete the paragraph with words from the box. common The Owl 1 huge recycle Centre is a nonprofit rescue organization in South Africa that is dedicated to the protection of owls. It has also been doing incredible work for the environment. In 2018, the center started a project to collect used plastic bottles and 2 them into owl houses. Plastic bottles are an increasingly sight in our rivers and oceans. By reusing these plastic bottles, the center can build more nesting. boxes for owls and also ensure that less plastic ends up in the ocean. The project has been a 4 success, and the center is now raising money to buy a ship that will collect plastic directly from the ocean.

関係詞の並び替えの問題です。教えてください。

1) ボブはとても率直だ。 思ったことは何でも口にする。 (his mind, whatever, is on) Bob is very frank. He says 2) 私のチケットをだれでもほしい人にあげるよ。 I'll give my ticket (whoever, to, it, wants) 3) 私は運賃がどんなに安くても船旅はしたくない。 (is, cheap, however, the fare) I don't want to travel by ship, 4) 何が起きてもあきらめないで。 (matter, no, what, happens) fare don't give up 5) 私の兄は写真が大好きだ。 彼はどこにいてもいつも写真を撮る。 (where, is, he, matter, no) My brother loves photography. He always takes pictures,

なぜ陰性だと多重結合をしやすいんですか？

@ PILOT high-purity graphite GRAPHITE GRAPHITE eox 互変異性 ((ウ) C2H4O1ケトーエイール - アルコール エーテル ビニルアルコ CH=CH-OH JOHOR CH3 C=C-H アセ CH3-C-H アルデヒド 0 CH2CH2 R エチレンオモンド アルンの二重結合 の一方のCにOF H-C - CH OがCより陰性でCH2=C がついたもの!!! 環状のモーテル H -OH 多重結合をしゃ ビニルアルコール すいから! 不安定!!

緑の矢印の部分がわからないです。解説していてください🙇🏼‍♀️

5. Sketch the graph of y = 4 ln(2x+5) Remember to show the axis crossing points and the asymptotes. when x = 0, y = 4/n5 ⇒ y-intercept 10.4 In 5) when y=0, 0 = 4In (2x+5) 0= In (7x+5) 5) なぜ4なくなる? C° = 2x+5 0=loge (2x+5) x= -2 ⇒ x-intercept (-2,0) Vertical asymptote 2x+5:0 2x=-5 -2 X=-2.5 x= -2.5 [4m] y = 4n (2x+5) 4/15 6.4377... → X

オレンジで矢印を書いているところのステップがわからず、解説していてだきたいです🙇🏼‍♀️

4. Sketch the graph of y = 3e-2x - 5 Remember to show the axis crossing points and the asymptotes. when x=0. y = 30°-5 =3-5 - 2 = ⇒ y-intercept (0, -27 V when y=0, 0 = 3 1-2x 5 In = loge 30 = 5 ew= 1/3 - - 2x = In (15) √) ?? x= -1/2 in (13) ⇒ x-intercept (-/n (33).0) horizontal asymptotes ' y=-5 -m y = 31-πx 5 in 5/23 y [4m] -2 ⇒x y=-5

青線の部分がグラフから読み取る以外に方法があれば教えていただきたいです。グラフが不正確な時に間違うのを避けたいので、正確性の高い方法だと嬉しいです。

(b) Draw the graphs of y=|2x-5|and y=|4-x on the same axes. Hence solve |2x-5|<|4-x| 10 y=12x-51 -10 -8 -6 ~2 (1,3) (3,1 y=14-x1 -4 -2 0. -2 4. 4 -6- 6 00 8 10 X -8- --101 y = 14-x1, V-shaped, x-intercepts (4,0) y-intercepts (04) y = 12x-51, V-shaped, X - intercepts (2.5,0) y-intercepts (0.5) グラフでこの範囲を求める以外 The Bolution is 1くみくる に方法はありますか? [8m]

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MPLETION B. Complete the paragraph with words from the box. affect determined forget Sol Guy and Josh Thome are modern-day storytellers. Through their TV show, 4REAL, they share real-life fairy tales about young people who are to make a difference and improve lives. Each 4REAL show takes a celebrity to a different country. There, they meet young leaders who are helping other people in their community (e.g., by building community centers or by providing medical care). Guy and Thome hope that the stories will 2 viewers in ways they won't ³ Thom with Came and raise public awareness of social issues around the world.

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COMPLETION A. Complete the paragraph with words from the box. (r) pnine estimate 200 length perhaps similar 3 4 The largest ever flying animal lived 71 million years ago. It was a type of pterosaur with a wingspan of 12 meters. That is the 1 of some airplanes! Recently, a much smaller species of pterosaur was discovered in England. Paleontologists 2 that this creature (pictured) had a wingspan of about 75 centimeters and was in size to a crow. It probably lived about 124 million years ago. What caused the change in body size? competition between these flying reptiles led them to develop larger body sizes.