英検準1級のライティングです。 どなたでも構いません。添削をお願いしたいです！何を書いているか分からなければ、聞いてもらって全然大丈夫です。ていうか、読んだだけでは、全く理解できないと思います。 近日中に受けるので、明日の夕方頃までにお願いします🙏

Write an essay on the given TOPIC. Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Suggested length: 120-150 words TOPIC Do you think that gas-powered cars will be replaced by electric cars in the near future? 電時の排出 POINTS 走行エネルギーの asse). Environment Convenience #1124-Kat #veg Cost Industry 高速産 ・充電せった コストが高い 産業限られた 短いきが しが ・使用者が買いかえようとは 思わない 2:33. 1 充電スペースの 2015 3. cars will be replaced by electric cars I do not think that gas-powered opinion. in the near future, I have two reasons to support this One reason is that it may be not convenient for people to drive electric cars in these days society. For example, electric cars take more time to charge than gas-powered cars. Moreover, electric cars can run few distance. Onother reason is that electric cars cost a lot of money in the many situation. For example, people who use electric, cars usually sex charging places at the each houses, but they have to pay so much cash to do it, Also, they need to prepare too much money every month to charge electric Propte cash, For these reasons above, I believe that gas-powered cars will be replaced by electric cars in the near future. total: 179 words

英検準2添削お願いします 質問はDo you think it is good to buy used products? です

4/q Yes, I have Second I think it is 7 good to buy used Two reasons to Support my opinion. For it is Becouse cheaper than these products reasons new products. it is good buy used products. good for the environment. I think 中古品 used. 50 ~ 60 is good to by products.

一枚目は合ってるか、二枚目は分からないので教えてください。

2 Forming the tense 動詞を正しい時制にする。 Put the verbs into the correct tense. 1 Lisbet's parents weren't born (not born) in the US. 2 Lisbet and her family goles) every day. (go) to the beach 3 In the picture, Lisbet is surfing (surf) at the beach. 4 Junichiro's father works (work) in I.T. to work 5 "I'm going (work) for my father after the course," says Junichiro. 6 In the picture, Junichiro is sitting (sit) on his motorcycle. 7 Marina doesn't work (not work) with Tomás. 8 "I am acting (act) in a production of Hamlet next year,” says Tomás. 9 In the picture, Tomás and Marina are walking (walk) by the river.

schoolと、he。howeと、heの間には、なんの接続詞が省略されているのでしょうか…？

2A (1) Jiro was going home from school He wanted to drink something cold. B () gave cold tea to him at home o He was happy because he got it. sq

教科書の英文の和訳をお願いしたいです。 分からない単語(赤で記入)を調べても 自分の中で和訳ができません…。 授業内で発表など色々あって、そこで 間違うのが怖いので和訳をお願いしたいです…🙇‍♂️

なす多 What is holism()? The medical professional's view of human beings influences. the planning and care provided to patients. For years, the health 従事者 長いp て 提供れる。 care community considered bódy and mind as separate entities, er year Now, it is believed that caréPHOViders need to yiēw an individual s をのてaなす 明電 @ 体的に、ああを as a whole, complete person, not as an assémbly of distinct párts. Viewed in this light, any distúrbance in one part is a disturbance of the whole system, the whole being. Therefore, health care pro- の 体のれれ fessionals must consider how the part of an individual under た下にある concern) relátes to all others and also consider the inferaction 10 and relationship of the individual to the external environment. This view is called holism, a holistic view of humans. :生物じ理、社年的が Humans are an open biòpsychósocial systenm with many inter- めま 提供する: related subsystems. In'brder to ptovide appiopriate healthcare based on a patient's needs, healthcare professionals must focus 15 on the interrelated needs of body, mind, emotion, and spirit. Abraham Maslow's® theory It was Abraham Maslow's human needs théory that offered the frámework for holistic health care. His model includes both 、操供 る的 生理的 心鶏的 怪える 良々に」 physiologic) and psychologic needs, which he arfánges in Order of importance from those essential for phiysical sufVival to those necéssary to develop to the füllest human potential9 Lower-level 20 心体 週不可欠 needs must be met to some extent before higher-level needs can スリ組た、@か。 be addressedio An individual usually persists in trying to meet a 場たす need until it is met. If a need goes unmet, physical disòrders, 25 psychological“imbalance, or death can Maslow's five categories of needs, in hiefarchical order. O Physiologic needs: air, food, water, shelter, rest and sleep, and temperature maintenance) eSáfety and secúrity needs: the need to be safe and to feel 30 OCCur. Below are 野屋eカラーを 所 safe, both in the physical environment and in human rela- tionships; 8 Loye and belónging" needs: the need for giving and receiv- ing love and the need for feeling that one atains®) a place in 所属(優) (7) 脅け人れ a group; OSelf-esteem needs: self-esteem® (feelings of indépéndence, Cumpetence, and self-respect) and estéém from others Toidon 自等 35 独立性 身する

the shirts have been ironed. ってhas beenじゃないんですか。

英検に向けて英作文を書きました 添削や「こうしたらもっと良くなる」という点がありましたら、ぜひコメントよろしくお願いします🙇‍♂️ 客観的な意見を取り入れて、今後さらに良い作文を書きたいと思うので、ご協力お願いします

Topic Agree or Disagree: Help from the local community is crucial for raising children POINTS → discipline、safety、working parents、privacy 「肯定意見」 Iagree with the statement that help from the local community is crucial for raising children. There are two reasons to support this contention: the promotion in working for parents and the respect of discipline. These days, almost all the companies in Japan are facing the problem which is how they treat their employees who have children. In fact, these people, especially women, have difficulty in working. What the matters worse, many of them are forced to quit their job because of raising children. To deal with this problem, it is necessary for the local community to help parents raise children. Moreover, help from others will lead to promote the rate of women who continued working after childbirth. In other words, thanks to help from the local society, Japanese companies can improve their working environment. In addition to this, children will be sociable and polite if they are taken care of by another person of family. Also, children will realize the importance of cooperation with others. For these reasons, I strongly believe the local society should do more for parents who raise children.

あまり理解ができていないので教えてほしいです。

1 次の文の( )に入れるのにふさわしい語を下の枠内から選びなさい。 1. He seemeda bit cold ( ), but I gradually got used to him. 2. An independent attitude is not always ( ) in Japan. 3. Children do not always ( ) their parents' concerns about them. 4. Do you have ( ) to park your car here? 5. It is natural to feel ( )in a new environment. 6. Japanese students tend to expect more ( ) from their host families. 7. Milk needs to be stored in the ( 8. Omotenashi can roughly be translated as ( 9. The grammar-translation method still ( ) language classes. 10. You should not forget that your main ( )is to study. initially appreciate attention refrigerator valued permission dominates uneasy hospitality purpose 2次の文の( )に入れるのにふさわしい語を下の枠内から選びなさい。 1. A( )from a new pizza restaurant was delivered today. 2. Bell peppers come in three ( ) colors. 3. Everything on these supermarket ( ) looks delicious. 4. Green peppers are picked before they ( 5. Other things being equal, ( ) tend to choose the cheaper items. 6. The different colors represent different ( )of growth. 7. The new restaurant is located ( ) the post office. 8. What are some ( )of eating lots of vegetables? 9. Yellow peppers contain more ( )than green peppers. 10. You can enjoy the different ( )of these vegetables. mature flyer nutrients flavors stages shelves benefits distinct opposite consumers

英検準一級のライティングで、POINTS を2つ使って、、と書かれているのですか、POINTS の言葉をそのまま英作文に取り入れないといけないのでしょうか？？誰か教えて欲しいです！お願いします🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️

Grade Pre-1 4 English Composition Write an essay on the given TOPIC. Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. n Linm caretly o Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Suggested length: 120-150 words Write your essay in the space provided on Side Any writing outside the space will not be graded. of your answer sheet. TOPIC Is it a good idea for local governments to build tourist sites, such as theme parks and museums? 1 think it s a go0d idea fonulocal gorerments, te Puild touristらiteni ら0ch as theme Parks andnmuneums. I nave two reabons itosuppOrmfor ri my opinion. Fir気れ10f.all, theme parks ond mnseumo are effected on vocal.ie. peopie. Because POINTS Construction costs Efect on local people Spending by visitors The environment laned, How lontg You cyuld plck diem son The tetal would be S12 h en canceled Tdock train to Ketb ady, he e Did1o

英検準一級のwritingです。誰か、採点して欲しいです！できれば、この文を改善したものも教えて頂きたいです！お願いします！🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️ 文字数が全然足りないのですが、どうしたらいいですか？😢 《 書きたかったこと 》 ・野菜は低価格なので、他の食べ物よりも安く買え... 続きを読む

Grade Pre-1 20125 4 English Composition 40160×2,80~100 20025 2644 Write an essay on the given TOPIC. Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Suggested length: 120-150 words Write your essay in the space provided on Side B of your answer sheet. Any writing outside the space will not be graded. TOPIC Agree or disagree: More people should become vegetarians in the future I agree that more people bhould beconme ne vegetarions in the future.1 nave two reasons t0 6upport my Opinion TO Degin witn, vegetablen ore cheaper tnan food or fion, meal. flour. And, becaube it is lewa Costi people (con Duいy vegetables. se0ond, eating vegetables is very healtn.I+l's contained many nutriteク 50, chiloren ana clderly vecome very うtronger. TPere f ore , I think trat many peOPle bhould become veget&rians more than now. POINTS Animal rights Cost Environment Health