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TOPIC
Should companies be required to produce goods that are easy to
recycle?
POINTS
● Company profits
Customer demand
Pollution
Product quality

I think companies should be
No.
required to produce goods that.
are easy to recycle. I
have two reasons. To begin
with, producing recyclable goods is
good for environment. For example,
producing plastic goods have many
disadvantages point such as generating
pollution issue and disposing hardly.
If plastic goods are barned,
it will emit carbon dioxide and
earth will be covered with
pollution. Companies should create
Sustainable society to protect earth
by producing recyclable goods. In the
Jeand place, company will get more
profits by doing so. Thesedays,
many people are interested in SD6s.
If companies produce such goods,
they can attract attention from
many people, and they will
buy recyclable goods. It connect
company profits. Thetore, companies show
produce goods that are easy
to
Vecyde!