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3 次の文章は, Fred が、 コンサートのあと Yutaka に送ったEメールの内容である。
Hello, Yutaka,
Thank you for inviting me and my brother to the concert. It was so much
fun for us. The brass band and the guitar club played a lot of anime music.
My brother was excited to listen to them.
For me, the performance of the chorus was the best. You sang some English
songs very well. One of them was my favorite song, "Stand by Me. When I
listened to it, I remembered my friends in my country.. I often enjoyed singing
that song with them at school. I like it very much.
In December, we will have a winter concert at our school. Will you come to
the concert? You can come with your friends, of course. We will sing many
songs. How about joining us? Tell the members of your club about my idea.
I will be very happy if your club can sing with us. Let's sing Stand by Me
together!
Your friend,
Fred
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Stand by Me 『スタンド・バイ・ミー』 (曲名)

club played Stand by Me very well.
(2) Yutaka は Fred に返事のEメールを送ることにしました。 あなたが Yutaka だとしたら,
Fred にどのような返事のEメールを送りますか。 次のく条件> に合うように、下の
の中に、三つの英語の文を書きなさい。
<条件>
前後の文につながるように書き, 全体としてまとまりのある返事のEメールとすること。
Fred に伝えたいアイデアを一つ取り上げ, そのアイデアの具体的な内容を含めること。
Hi, Fred,
Thank you for sending me an e-mail. I'm very happy to know that you and
your brother had a good time with us. Your idea for a winter concert sounds
great.
I talked with all of the members of the chorus, and they said they
wanted to join the concert! I want to join it, too! Now I have another idea
to make the concert more exciting.
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*Actually, we did this last year at the school festival. Many students and
teachers enjoyed it. Why don't you talk with your friends and teachers at
your school about this?
Your friend,
Yutaka
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3 (²) I think we should have many kinds of music..
For example, Japanese pops, Korean pops.
I want to enjoy.

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