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Kiera❤

因為要考英檢-複試，這是我自己練習寫的短文寫作，
求幫我看看做批改謝謝 🙏

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Last Wednesday night, Tom slept sweetly.
Suddently, a bookcase was fell down and
was broken by the big earthquake.
Tom quickly wake up from slepquake.
5 He was scared. As soon as the earthquake
~ stopped, he ran out of the house
All of his neighbors stood and discussed
outside of the earthquake.
What a teribble earthquake!

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題目:上個星期三的晚上,Tom 睡覺睡到一半時,突然發生強烈地
第二部分:段落寫作(50%)
震,接下來發生了什麼事呢?請根據以下的圖片寫一篇約 50
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