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以下の TOPIC について, あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい。
POINTS は理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。 ただし, これら以外
の観点から理由を書いてもかまいません。
●語数の目安は 80語~100語です。
例題
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TOPIC
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Today, some companies allow their employees to wear
casual clothes like jeans or T-shirts. Do you think the
number of such companies will increase in the future?
POINTS
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Business culture
とう思り
● Comfort
Fashion
(解答 I think that more companies will allow employees to wear clothes like jeans or
T-shirts. By doing so, they can make their workers happy. These clothes are more
comfortable than dress clothes, so workers will be more relaxed and able to enjoy
their work. Second, many companies want to help the environment. If employees
are allowed to wear casual clothes, they will be cooler. Because of this, companies
Won't have to use air conditioners as much, which will reduce the amount of
energy used. So, more companies will allow employees to wear casual clothes to
work.
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