Question

げすと

英検準1級の英作文の添削をお願いします。

Date
No.
Topic: Agree or diogre. Pegle will depend more on self- driing.cars
in the future.
I disagree with the idea that pesple will depand
more on
self- driving cars in the future, I have two reasons to support
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my opinion in terims of unespectod poblems and Cost.
Fist. there may
be some unexpected problems when we are driving
運転中(2)
I think that self- diving cars are not pertect,
a self-driing car.
so
few accidents, at leost, will happen. We can not say
a
り。
Safe.
Aren
Second, self- deiving cars Cost is higher than ordinary cars.
self-driving cars are
Self-dhiving cars need high quality technelogy. Materials are.
differat trem ordinary cars' materials. Alse. it is very
diffialt
Le
to make self- driving cars,
50 they costs highly, People cannit
co
buy them easily.
For these reasons,Ithink people will not depend more on
self deiviog le
と
Cars in the futare.

Answer 1

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るぅ

だいたい良く書けていると思います。
赤マーク最初は「運転中」ということで、while drivingです。self-driving carsに対してもdriveを使うかは微妙なところです。operatingも使えます。
最後の赤マークは、主語のtheyに対して動詞が三単現のcostsになっています。
また、動詞のcostと副詞のhighlyの組み合わせはほとんど聞きません。画像に書き込んだ副詞や、a lot, too much, a fortune と組み合わせるといいです。

青マークは間違いではありません。
他にもこういう表現があります、という参考です。

げすと

ありがとうございます。細かいミスをなくせるよう頑張ります。