Question

妃

這個是我外師課的功課
就是介紹臺灣
寫出來的至少要有一分鐘，我就突然爆發，不小心就寫滿一頁.....
但我怕我的文法或單字用錯，請大家幫我看一下
我居然用了1個半小時寫...寫到後面真的很..不想寫，字醜抱歉
謝謝！！

places
to Taiwan. We have
it
can
a very beautiful place,
really delic
They are
is
We have
I
never
Have
during
a lot of interesting
Welcome you come
earring o
here. First, Sun Moon Lake is
make people relax a lot. The most famous are Nine Frog Acrobats
You can
and Gondola. Although the gondola is very high, it still is
interesting. I believe that you want to try it! Next landmarks
Pingxi ,
there are old street and Sky Lantern Festival
go to the Pingxi, I think that it
must be interesting. If you come
to Taiwan is June to August , you must bring an umbrella . Because
this time often rains
you must bring an umbrella or raincoat .
We don't have snow in the winter so it won't be very
cold.
Taiwanese family is good and kind but sometimes is strict.
Most of the people are have gender stereotypes. It is not good.
They always feel boys are good than girls. It is not fair to the
girls. All of the parents hope to their kids can get good grades, but
I think that the grades is not everything, the happy just important.
In Taiwan , people usually go jogging take a walk or ride a bike in
the park. We also play badminton, basketball, baseball
They can make
us happy and relax. We go to some landmarks, too. Going hiking
also is everyone favorite. It makes us close to nature. There are many
night markets in Taiwan. Every night markets sell
yummy.
food clothes
1 W 81/

No.
DATE
, earring or shoes. The most famous food is Stinky Tofu . It is
really delicious. You must try it. Pearl milk tea is famous , too.
You can go to Shilin Ninght Market Luodong Night Market .
and
They are largly. You can
my
hometown , Dounan ! E
We have Dounan Night Market ,
welcome you!
Have fun! Taiwan is for trip.
come
good

Answer 1

小羊駝

你的字很好看欸！！
開頭的welcome you come to taiwan是錯的
我在網路上找了一篇文章，你可以參考看看截圖！
Welcome是只能用在客人/對方到了以後才可以的

小羊駝

還有就是the most famous 後面，在我的印象中是要加一個名詞的

小羊駝

It still is interesting 應該是it is still interesting

小羊駝

Next landmarks 應該是單數next landmark

小羊駝

還有一個我比較不確定的，old street，如果你是要指平溪老街的話應該要大寫，然後寫全名Pingxi Old Street，如果不是，應該是要寫old streets
不過這個我比較不確定

小羊駝

I never go to 應該是I never went to

小羊駝

If you come to taiwan is during June 這裡是不用is的

小羊駝

如果你是要指這段期間很常下雨的話，應該要換成this period of time比較正確

小羊駝

Most of the people are have應該要換成 most people have比較正確

小羊駝

Boys are good than girls 應該是boys are better than girls，good是不能用在這個情況下的

小羊駝

跟Most of the people 一樣，all of the parents 可以換成all parents 比較好

小羊駝

Hope to their kids can get good grades 應該是 hope their kids，不用to

小羊駝

Grades is not everything 應該是grades are not everything

小羊駝

The happy just important 應該是being happy is more important 或者是happiness is more important也可以

小羊駝

Going hiking also is everyone favorite 應該是going hiking is also everyone’s favorite

小羊駝

It makes us close to nature 要換成it brings us closer to nature比較正確

小羊駝

還有就是最後一句的文法是錯的，只是我想了很久不知道要怎麼寫才會對，抱歉！😅

小羊駝

以上就是我的回答了，希望能夠對你有幫助！！

妃

非常謝謝你😊
國二升三錯這麼多😂是不是我的寫作能力不太好

小羊駝

哈哈哈不會啦，我覺得你的寫作能力很好啊，我也是二升三，我就沒辦法寫這麼多字
我都是在不確定文法對不對的時候上網查，錯誤率就會少很多喔

妃

好👌謝謝你😊😊