Question

candy

請幫我看有文法有沒有錯誤🙇‍♀️❗

7. Please describe your personality. My personality is great, when I
sad, I don't complain. Instead, I try to do my
Interest and my mood become better,
請推述你的個性。
Answer:

Answer 1

✨ ベストアンサー ✨

檸檬樹下🏞️

我自己照自己的方式試著修修看的，第一次改做得不夠好請見諒≥≤

［原句修改］
I have a good/wonderful personality. When I am sad, I will not complain. Instead/On the contary, I will improve my mood by doing something that interests me.

［進階繕寫建議］
原句/I'm a rational(理性的) girl/boy/student/person. When I'm in a bad mood, I will try my best to do something that interests me to lift/boost my spirits(轉變低落心情) by doing things that l'm interested in instead of complaining/grumbling(抱怨、發牢騷、ㄇㄇ) to others.

有些觀念我有核對/查閱資料
希望我的文法正確~
有問題都可以再問(◕ᴥ◕)
希望能幫到你≥≤

參考網址：
https://m.facebook.com/drchinglish/photos/a.1835467926693940/1915433398697392/?type=3
https://www-thenewslens-com.cdn.ampproject.org/v/s/www.thenewslens.com/amparticle/103458?amp_js_v=a6&amp_gsa=1&usqp=mq331AQKKAFQArABIIACAw%3D%3D#aoh=16263625033020&referrer=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.google.com&amp_tf=%E4%BE%86%E6%BA%90%EF%BC%9A%251%24s&ampshare=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.thenewslens.com%2Farticle%2F103458

檸檬樹下🏞️

*有“/”的是可以自己選擇ㄉ

candy

你超用心的(≧ω≦)/💓
謝謝