Question

SIZUKU

英検準一級のライティングです。明日なのですが自信がないので見ていだきたいです。

Topic: Should the goverment do more to
encourage young people to vote in election?
Some people say that it is not necessary for
the goverment to do more to encourage young
people to vote in election.
On the other hand, others say not.
I agree with the later idea and have
Two reasons to support my opinion.
First of all I will explain that from
the point of view of trusting in politicians.
To clarity this, it the goverment is to
trusted by young people than eledery people,
they can be assisted a long time.
Therefore, they will collect vote year by year.
Second of all, I will explain that from
the point of view of Social responsibility.
Recently, it is said that the ratio of voting
from young people is less in Japan.
In order to make better world, All people
are interested in politics.
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According to the reasons mentioned above,
I think the goverment do more to encourage
young people to vote in election.

Answer 1

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The left page:
Line 2,9 : government
Line 5 : I agree with the latter and ……
Line 7 : First of all,
Line 10 : trusted by young people more than by the elderly
Line 12 : votes
The right page:
Line 3,4 : In order to make the world better, all people should be interested in politics.
Line 6 : government should do more

SIZUKU

わかりやすくありがとうございます、！