Question

まとりょーしか

英文の添削をしてほしいです。英検準ニ級の問題です。
Question： Do you think students should clean their school dy themselves?
答えは以下の写真です！！

Yes, I do. I think student should clean their school
BY
themselves. I have two reasons. First, It
good experience for them. In the future,
when they clean them room, this experience is
very useful. Second, If they use clean robot,
•n. it's too much
many.
So, I think student
should clean their school by themselves.

英語 英作文 英検

Answer 1

すみっこ

It is good experience.→it is a good experience.
It is much many.→it is much money.
（お金がかかると言いたいのでしょうか。違っていたらごめんなさいm(_ _;)m）
３行目のthemはstudents に置き換えたほうがいいと思います！
４行目のthem roomが何を指しているのかが分かりにくいかもです。
あと、最初のYes，I do.は書かなくてもいいと思います！