Question

Pengguna Clearnote

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I think
children should be
alloned to have smartphone,

Answer 1

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can enjoy have ではなく
can enjoy having だと思います。

それとSecond, children can meil ではなく
can send an email to their friends とかの方が文字数も稼げるのでいいと思います！

間違っていたらすみません〜😢😢

Pengguna Clearnote

ありがとうございます🙇‍♀️