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どなたか添削お願いします🙏🏻💧
(1,2枚目は問題、3枚目が私のです)

2次の文章は,カナタに帰国したJudy が Maki に送ったEメールの内容である。
Dear Maki,
Thank you for your help during my stay in Japan. Do you remember that you took me
to the Dream Festival ? I enjoyed it very much.
I enjoyed learning about Japanese culture at the festival. I played the shamisen for the
first time at the event "Try new things!" The sound of the shamisen was very new to
me. It was a wonderful experience. I learned that it is very important for me to try
new things.The shamisen was one new thing. In Canada, I have started to practice the
shamisen. Ipractice it every day.
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The other day, I went to a concert withmy sister, Amy. It was exciting ! Japanese
*musical instruments, such as the shakuhachi, shamisen, and wadaiko, were played
together with
western musical instruments, such as drums and guitars. I was very
surprised. When they were played together, music became more beautiful and
powerful ! At the end of the concert, I was very happy to have a chance to play the
shamisen witha special band on the stage ! That was a lot of fun.
I found a new thing I wanted to do. I'm very glad about that. Have you started doing
any new things? Ifyou have, tell me about them. I'm looking forward to hearing from
you.
Yours,
Judy
[注) musical instrument 楽器
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powerful 力強い
sheのふセでけどれか。

○ Judy に伝えたい内容を一つ取り上げ,それを取り上げた理由などを含めること、
Thank you for your e-mail, I enjoyed reading it. I'm very surprised to hear that you |
にどのような返事のEメールを送りますか。 次のく条件>に合うように,下の
2) Maki は Judy に返事のEメールを送ることにしました。あなたが Maki だとしたら、
○ 前後の文につながるように書き, 全体としてまとまりのある返事のEメールとす。
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the stage made Judy very happy.
にどのような返事のEメールを送りますか。次のく条件>に合うように, 下ドの
三つの英語の文を書きなさい。
く条件>
○ 前後の文につながるように書き,全体としてまとまりのある返事のEメール。
こと。
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I'm looking forward to seeing you again !
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Answer 1

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ブチネコ

ほぼオッケーだと思いますよ！
ですが、「2年前から(2年間)」と期間を言いたいときはsince two years agoではなくfor two yearsがいいかと思います。
sinceは、例えばsince 2020のようにスタートした時期を伝えたい場合に使います。

とまと

そうなんですね！ありがとうございます🙌🏻🙌🏻