Question

みぃ低浮上

英作文の確認お願い致します！！！
問7です。

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(That night, Lucy writes in her diary.)
2
His name is Shibusawa
Today, my friend Akira talked about a great Japanese person.
Eichi. The idea of well-being wasn't popular in the Meiji era, but Shibusawa worked hard
for it. I thought that our world has become better than it was in *the past because there
were people like him. The future world can also be better if we take action now. There
are a lot of things to learn from the past. So I want to learn about other great Japanese
people.
〔注〕 the past･･････ 過去
take action ・・・・行動を起こす
As Jud
問7 下線部について,もしあなたが好きな日本の偉人について発表するとしたら、だれについて発表
したいですか。発表したい人物の名前を、解答用紙の I want to talk about に続く下線の上に英
語で書き,そのあとに,その人物について2文以上の英語で書きなさい。ただし, 渋沢栄一,福沢
ゆきち おぎのぎんこ
諭吉,荻野吟子は選ばないこと。(4点)
ふくざわ

I want to talk about
She spread
Tsuda
Umeko
education
for
|問7
And
she
built
the
collage.
women.

Answer 1

✨ 最佳解答 ✨

さきち

文章はまちがってないですよ。あえて言うなら、一文目と二文目の主語が同じなので、繋げた方がより自然です。あと、the collegeはどこの大学か分からないので、Tsudajyuku Collegeなどとしたらどうでしょうか。あとbuildだと、正確に言うと津田梅子が大学を大工さんみたいに建てたというニュアンスが出るので、establishにしてはどうでしょう。
She went to the united state when she was very young and studied there.
After coming back to Japan, she spread education for women and established Tsudajyuku College.

みぃ低浮上

丁寧にありがとうございます！！！