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I went to the ○○ Aquarium with grandparents and my mother this afternoon.
I watched a lot of fish there.
They were colorful.
So I thought they were beautiful.
Whele shark is very big！
It's interesting...
I bought a key holder and tote bag.
Ahter that we went home by car.
I'm tired. But, it was a nice day.
I went to go again.

なにか文法的に変なところはあるでしょうか？
あったらおしえてください。

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Xx_Saskia_xX

添削してみました。
*が付いている単語はスペル間違いです。

I went to ○○ Aquarium with my grandparents and my mother this afternoon.
I watched a lot of colorful fish there.
I thought they were beautiful.
The whele* shark was very big!
The aquarium was interesting.
I bought a key chain and a tote bag there.
Ahter* that we went home by car.
I was tired but it was a nice day.
I went* to go again.

Xx_Saskia_xX

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