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英語の自己紹介でこう発表するのですが、改善点はありますか？

hello,everybody. My name is 〇〇．I’m 13 years old. My birthday is April 17th.I live in （住んでいるところ）.My hobby is shopping. My favorite animal is dogs. My favorite food is a chocolate. In my future I want to office worker. That is all.Thank you for listening.

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Xx_Saskia_xX

添削してみました。

My birthday is April 17th.
→ My birthday is on April 17th.

My favorite food is a chocolate.
→ My favorite food is chocolate. この場合 a は不要。

In my future I want to office worker.
→ When I grow up, I want to be an office worker.

自己紹介頑張って下さい。

Xx_Saskia_xX

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