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英文の添削お願いします！

字が汚くてすみません。

Date
May / 21th / 2022 / cloudy
I woke up.
at five today.
I ate bread for break fast.
It was tasty.
hard.
I wen to my club activity,
The practice was very
But it makes my happy to talk with
my friends.
I studied English in the afternoon,
with my
friends
I am going to hang our
No.

Answer 1

✨ 最佳解答 ✨

カバさん🦛

こんばんは！可愛らしいジャーナルですね🐇

日記用の添削をしますね😊
I woke up at five today.
I ate bread for breakfast.
It was tasty.
I went to my club activity.
The practice was very hard.
But it made me happy to talk with my friends.
I studied English in the afternoon.
I am going to hang out with my friends.

(見直す時)
今回は一日の出来事を振り返って(過去形)で書き、最後に明日以降の予定で(未来形)を使っているので、時間の流れを意識して書いてみると今よりさらにもっと良くなります👍

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美味しくないという場合badを使うことも出来ますが、blandと使う事も多いので良かったらセットで覚えてみてもいいかもです！

何かあればまた🦛

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ありがとうございます！