Read the paragraphs below. Tick (V) the strong paragraphs. If you think
the sentences make a weak paragraph, say why. Tick one or more of
these reasons:
a. The sentences are not all about the same topic.
b. There are not enough sentences.
C. There is no topic sentence.
d. Some sentences say the same thing.
Sports instructor is a good part-time job. You can enjoy your favorite activity
and earn money at the same time. Some other jobs pay better. You can also
volunteer as an instructor. I had a difficult time learning to swim, because my
instructor wasn't very good. My tennis instructor was much better. If you get a lot
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of experience as a sports instructor, you can get a job at a gym or as a coach in
the future.
Problems?
b
d
a
C
Strong paragraph?
