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I didn't know that there were so many senior citizens who were
Mr. Lee: You are still young, so you have a lot of time to think about your future. Are there
interesting activities in our city. I can't imagine what our lives will be like when wete
Mr. Lee: That's great. People are living longer now, soI think it's important to keep happy |
students at the community center in the city. She is very good at calligraphy. She is |
I really respect my grandmother. She teaches calligraphy to elementary schoo) |
題あり,放送はすべペて英語で行われます。 放送される内容についての質問にそれぞれ答え」
なさい。No.1~No.5 及び No.7は, 質問に対する答えとして最も適切なものを、A~D
|4(After class, Akina, Hayato and Mr. Lee are talking abOUl IM
I'm surprised that so many senior citizens in Singapore are still working
Akina:
Hayato: Me, too.
older.
any senior citizens you respect, Akina?
Akina:
glad that she can teach many children. She loves her work very much.
and healthy even when we're older.
問7 本文 4の会話の中で, Akina は, 自分の祖母がどのようなことに喜んでいると述べてい
ますか。日本語で書きなさい。(4点)
問8 次は,後日の Akina と Mr. Lee の会話です。自然な会話になるように,( )に適切た。
語以上の英語を書きなさい。(4点)
Mr. Lee, I went to the English language school Hayato talked about before. 1
learned a lot from the senior citizens working there.
Akina:
Mr. Lee: I'm sure they know a lot of interesting things we don't know. (
at the English language school ?
There are five teachers.
Akina:
Mr. Lee: I see. When senior citizens are happy and healthy, we can be happy, too. We can
learn a lot from senior citizens by talking with them.
5 次の(質問)に対して, [条件]に従い,まとまった内容の文章を5文以上の英文で書きなさ
(10点)
[質問) What is the best way to learn English for you?
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✨ 最佳解答 ✨

AOI

文法がかなり使えていてとても良いと思います！

しかし、2つ目の理由についてなんですけど、ただ歌うのが楽しい、だけだと答えになってない（かなぁ）と思います！書くなら「歌うのは楽しいので楽しく勉強できる｣と付け加えた方が良いと思います！

あとはOKじゃないでしょうか。

中一なのにこんな上からで、すみません…！！