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私の書いた英文を添削していただきたいです🙇🏻
都立入試に向けての問題です。

(クオリティがとても低いですが…)

次の文章は,英語の授業で Maiが行ったスピーチの内容である。この文章を読んで, あとの各問に答えよ。
She came to Japan with her family from China last year. Her father is Chinese and her mother
Last month, she began to work as a volunteer in Japan. She does volunteer work at the hospital
Today I'm going to talk about my friend, Lin.
is Japanese, so she speaks both Chinese and Japanese.
pear here every Saturday. Iasked her, “Whydo vou work as a volunteer at the hospital? She
ons 9mon
answered, "When Iwas sick in the hospital in China. Italked with someone and I felt happy. She
thinks talking can make sick people better sometimes.
Last Saturday, I went to the hospital with her and talked with a girl in the hospital, She said to
Lin, “Thank you, Lin. Iwant to talk with you again,” Lin looked happy then. Iwas very happy,
too. Ofcourse, Lin will go there to see her again.
NowI think I should start something, too. I'd liketo do something for other people. How
about you? Thank you for listening.

(2) あなたは,人の役に立つために取り組んでみたいことを英語の授業で発衣するこ cmなりょし
い)
く条件>に合うように, 下の
の中に,三つの英語の文を書きなさい。
く条件>
○ 前後の文につながるように書き,全体としてまとまりのある発表とすること。
○ あなたが取り組んでみたいことを一つ取り上げ,それを取り上げた理由などを含めること。
Today I'm going to talk about what Iwant to do for other people.
How about you? Thank you for listening.

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which can
move.
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