こんばんは英作文の添削をお願いします！ たくさんの人の意見が欲しいです！ 1、2枚目が下書きでこの文章と点数です 最初で満点をとりたいのでchat GPTを交えて文を書き直しました。不自然な文があったら教えてください！ 明日の午後提出です！

I'm going to talk about an experience that changed my life Was when I studied studying abroad in Niseko, Hokkaido. I stayed for a total of 2 months last summer I made a lot of friends. and this summer. Speaking in both Japanese and English deepened our bond. Even after studying abroad we l are still in touch. We are going to have a reunion in Tokyo on Christmas Actually, I hadn't been good at English before I studied abroad. A friend of mine said "Don't be afraid ". Then to me •get rid of my weakness in English. I had a conversation with my I was able to native teacher in English through the activitities. In these activities, had a We did BBQ, cooked, and went sightseeing. It was d again, I would like to go skiing. lot of fun. If I could study abroad in Niseko to Niseko. You can enjoy Niseko's lifestyle Please yo m

英語のbe Grammar bookIIの答え知っている人が居たら30ページから5ページまでの解説を教えて欲しいです。 お願いします。至急です。

この問題を並び替えていただけないでしょうか？ また、訳も書いていただけたら幸いです。

9 Grammar and Expressions Put the words in the correct order. 1. Misato about / me /a/ told / story when she was in Rome. 2. I Anderson yesterday. Dr. to email forgot / carelessly 3. My brother 4. in study / England may abroad 5. The vet said " for a year. train, I will take a taxi. I the miss / last / if will your fine / dog / be tomorrow." vet: veterinarian up

英検準2級の Eメールのライティングの採点をお願します💦 (画質悪くてすみません)

Name: Class Student number. Eiken Grade Pre-2 Writing Practice, Email Reply 17, October 2024. 準2級 Writing 既存の 「意見論述」 の出題に加え、 「Eメール」 問題を出題 Hi! ●あなたは、外国人の知り合い (Alex) から, Eメールで質問を受け取りました。この質問にわかりやすく普 える返信メールを.に英文で書きなさい。 ●あなたが書く返信メールの中で, AlexのEメール文中の下部について、 あなたがより理解を深めるために、 下のを買う具体的な顔を2つしなさい。 ● あなたが書く返信メールの中でに書く英文の敷の目安は40~50話です。 の外に書かれたものは採点されません。 ●答が Alex のEメールに対応していないと判断された場合は、0点と点されることがあります。 Alex の E メールの内容をよく読んでから答えてください。 ● の下の Best wishes の後にあなたの名前を書く必要はありません。 of you asin boo ①どの時間から歩きはじめるの? INMI Recently, I started working part-time at a convenience store. I feel nervous, because I タイにいない. have never worked before. There are things that I don't understand, so I have to ask a lot of questions. But, my manager is kind and helps me. Do you think there will be more convenience stores in the future? それがね Your friend, Alex レジ tredi Your reply: Hi Alex. Thank you for your email. I am interested in working. By the way, I have two questions for this. Finse, when did you started working? Second. haw lang are you walking every day. your question. I don't think there will be more convenience stores in the future. Because of this, I listen to wanking part-time is very hard in a convenience store. About Best wishes, Grade Pre2 Email reply Content (内容) Coherence & Cohesion (構成) Vocabulary (語彙) Grammar (文法) Answer & reason 2 questions 理由を付けて答える 2つの質問 Links 接続詞 Total /16

英検2級です！ アドバイスください🙇‍♀️

I think Japanese people in general will be able to improve their English ability in the future. First, school education tended to focus on grammar and reading, but new policy will encourage teachers to help students English ability. In the future. English learning tools are increase. So, they can study chanse very more. Also, English is used their life. This is why I think their English ability improve in the future.

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ba.jp Before you do the Grammar Activities below, I recommend reading this Grammar Reference: Making requests Agreeing Refusing Would you mind opening the window? Of course not. Sorry, but I'm cold. Could you take off your shoes? Yes, of course. I'd rather not. Can you clean up your room? Sure. No problem. I'm afraid I'm busy. Asking for permission Giving permission Refusing Permission Do you mind if I play my guitar? Is it OK if I turn off the radio? No, not at all. Go ahead. Sure. No problem. I'd rather you didn't. Sorry, but I'm listening. To agree to a request with mind, use the negative: Would you mind opening the door? Not at all. Do you mind if I close the window? Of course not. Notice the different positions for please: Please can you help me? Can you help me, please? Can you please help me? (stronger) ACTIVITY ONE: Put these words in the correct order to make questions. Example: please/you/me/help/could 6月 9 tv JA

4番の問題がdriveかな？というぐらいはわかるんですが、それ以外の分の構成が難しくてわからないです。教えてください

D Grammar 3 Choose a, b or c. 1 Do you like to play soccer? 6 I don't a No, I'm not. b No, I don't. c Yes, I can. a like to 2 Can you play the guitar? play baseball at all. b like 7 How many languages c can speak? a Yes, I do. b Can't I? c Yes, I can. a can you b you do 3 Jenny swim. 8 Steve c are you to watch movies on DVD. a doesn't like to b likes not c doesn't like a likes b does c can 4 What sports do you play? a like b like to c likes 9 Shizuko a likes ski. b can c can to 5 Rashid a isn't b can sing, but he wants to learn. c can't 10 a Can b Do Daisy a good dancer? c Is This page is downloaded from www.macmillaneducationeverywhere.com Macmillan Publishers Limited 2017. This sheet may be photocopied and used within the class Breakthrough PLUS M O > C 14:07 日あ 2 Edition

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UNIT 7 Reading Reading 33点 10点 Grammar /32点 /15 Information Listening Writing /10 TOTAL 100点 全文 音声 なまけ者のトムが望んだ仕事とは何でしょう。 Tom was a very lazy man*. He didn't like hard work. But he needed a job. One day, (his/Tom / a job / asked / uncle / him / find / to ). "What kind of job?" asked the uncle. Tom answered, "I don't want to work. I want meat for lunch every day. I just want to walk around and take naps*. And I want 100 dollars a day." "( )" the uncle sighed*. 2 One day, Tom got a call from his uncle. "Tom, I found the perfect job for you. A tiger at the zoo died recently. They need a new tiger. You can be the tiger. You'll wear a tiger's skin and walk around, eat meat, and sleep in the cage* like a real tiger." "( 3 )" said Tom. "I'll start tomorrow!" 5 3 The next day, Tom was in the cage in tiger's fur. He just walked around, ate meat, 10 and took a nap. Tom was happy. 44 Suddenly, he heard an announcement*. "We'll soon have a special show. It's a fight between a lion and a tiger! Enjoy this exciting show." "( )" He looked around his cage. Then another cage was carried next to his. A fierce-looking* lion was in it. "I'll be killed!" he cried. The doors of both cages were opened. Tom jumped back. "( 6 )" 15 The big lion slowly walked toward him, roared*, and opened its mouth. "Stop! I'm not a tiger! I'm a man!" 5 "Shhh!" Tom heard a small voice from the lion. "( Ⓒ )” (252 words)

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Grammar 150 1. Fill in the blanks. (1)私は,彼女が新しいタイプのエアコンを開発することに自信があった。 )a new type of air conditioner. I was confident of ( ) ( (2) 私は明日の今ごろ, 水族館でイルカを観察しているだろう。 I ( ) ( ) ( (3) 彼は若い頃,世界中を旅行したようだ。 120 760 )()( ) traveled around the world when he was young. ME He ( (4) その本を読んでいるとき,私は新しいアイデアを思いついた。 NOVE is biogabvel ) ( ) the book, I thought of a new idea. 2. Put the words in the correct order. MOTERI Sum 3 (1) その種類の蝶は飛んでいる間,羽を羽ばたかせない。 ( flying / its wings / doesn't / while / flap) ) dolphins in the aquarium this time tomorrow. or That kind of butterflies ing eirt to, (2) 私は昨日,弟のチームが野球の試合で勝ったことを誇りに思っている。 17 (winning / the baseball game / my brother's team) b Speaki yesterday. I'm proud of (3) 加藤先生は,大学でスペイン語を学んだようだ。 (Spanish / to / learned / have / seems) at college. Mr. Kato A: B: A: B (1

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Grammar 150 1. Fill in the blanks. (1)私は,彼女が新しいタイプのエアコンを開発することに自信があった。 )a new type of air conditioner. I was confident of ( ) ( (2) 私は明日の今ごろ, 水族館でイルカを観察しているだろう。 I ( ) ( ) ( (3) 彼は若い頃,世界中を旅行したようだ。 120 760 )()( ) traveled around the world when he was young. ME He ( (4) その本を読んでいるとき,私は新しいアイデアを思いついた。 NOVE is biogabvel ) ( ) the book, I thought of a new idea. 2. Put the words in the correct order. MOTERI Sum 3 (1) その種類の蝶は飛んでいる間,羽を羽ばたかせない。 ( flying / its wings / doesn't / while / flap) ) dolphins in the aquarium this time tomorrow. or That kind of butterflies ing eirt to, (2) 私は昨日,弟のチームが野球の試合で勝ったことを誇りに思っている。 17 (winning / the baseball game / my brother's team) b Speaki yesterday. I'm proud of (3) 加藤先生は,大学でスペイン語を学んだようだ。 (Spanish / to / learned / have / seems) at college. Mr. Kato A: B: A: B (1