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Topic Agree or disagree: People will stop subscribing to printed newspapers in the future. I agree with the idea that people will stop subscribing to printed newspapers in the future. I have two opinions why I think so. First of all, to print newspapers uses a lot of papers. They are made by wood that is important nature material. The kind of nature things has limit to use, so we should not use them too much. The plants also play role in the keeping air clean. This is the reason why I think it is bad for environment. Secondly, the printed newspapers are too big to carry. Thesedays we can get it online and we cand read it all the time wherever you are. For example on the train, in office, in café and so on. For these reasons, I think people will stop subscribing printed newspapers.

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6時間登り続けて,私たちは山頂に着くことができました。 After six hours' climbing, we (succseed) in getting to the top of the mountain. 2()内から適当なものを選びなさい。(各1点) ed 1. I'm looking forward (to see, to seeing) you again. 2. She is used (to get, to getting) up early because she lives on a farm. 3. Lisa will soon get used (to drive, to driving) on the left. 4. I strongly object (to be, to being) treated like a child. 5. What do you say (to have, to having) lunch in the garden? 6. It is (no, not) use studying for an exam at the last moment. 7. (It, There) is a waste of money buying things you don't need. 8. (It, There ) is no telling what will happen next. 4.「~ に成功 2.b ~i to 意 6. 8

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年度 英語 15 [II] Write (VI) opinions. Write your answer in about 100 English words, not counting punctuation marks. Mr. John Spence's opinion on e-bikes My electric bike is one year old on Thursday, and it was a 75th birthday present. I have only ever been a casual cyclist, but had given my old bike away, as my creaky knees combined with living at the top of a hill-meant that I rarely used it. But with my e-bike I feel so empowered. It is so easy to get around to do a few errands that it often seems quicker than using a car and having to find parking. If anyone is tempted by the idea, I strongly recommend giving it a try. Ms. Liz Ormond's opinion on e-bikes Mr. Spence's enthusiastic praise for e-bikes omits any reference to pedestrians. There is no mention that they are more dangerous than other bikes. Can he tell us what 19 OC DE BESLOT ACAI BESI TE OF 0.8. safety studies have been done in relation to pedestrians, particularly in shared space, and what discussions have been held with organisations such as the Royal National Institute of Blind People? Also, since the motors are effective enough to propel bikes loaded with shopping and children, what effect would the additional weight have in a collision with a pedestrian? (Adapted from "Wheels of fortune: the pros and cons of e-bikes," The Guardian, May 19,2020)

④の答えは1のanotherですがなぜ②のotherではダメなのですか？

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3 Can you complete this conversati Complete the conversation with the words and expressions in the box. Use capital letters where necessary. Practice with a partner. Then role-play the conversation using your own ideas. all right breaking up hold on a second PU I'll call you back I've got Greg Kenji Greg Greg Waters. Kenji Hello, Greg. Tokyo. I was just time are you arriving on Monday? Greg Well, I have my ticket here. Let's see, I arrive Kenji at, um, 3:30 p.m. OK, I'll Oh, Hold on a This is just let's see ✓this is wearing what do you call it what was I saying Kenji from the office in calling to ask... What come to the airport to meet you. Second-I've got another call. All right Hi. Sorry about that. So, I'll meet you. So, how will I recognize you? Well, I'm tall and Sorry, Greg, I can't hear you. You're droam ? Oh, yes, blond hair and - Greg Kenji Greg OK. Listen, Kenji Hi. That's better. So, ? Greg I was describing myself. So, um, I'll be the blond the sunglasses,. weaking wh guy a USA T-shirt. Kenji Um, OK. Maybe I should wear a - what you call it? A thing with my name on it so you can find me? a badge. Good idea! Greg Oh, where were we with you mean Kenji USA UNIT 1 UNIT 1 12

解き方は合ってると思うんですけど、なぜか答えの方はmgtan45 になってます。なにが違うのか教えて欲しいです。左の自分で作った回答です。先生に教えてもらってこのやり方にしてました

Tsin neg TE Bing TE 物理 例題 67 クーロンの法則 長さL[m]の軽い絹糸の一端に質量m[kg〕の小球をつけ たものを2個、右図のように点からつるし、小球に等量 の正電荷を与えたところ,両者は反発し合い、2本の絹糸 のなす角が90°となった。 重力加速度の大きさをg〔m/s²]. クーロンの法則の比例定数をky.m²/C2〕として与えた 正電荷q [G] を L.m, g, を用いて表せ。 センサー 97 点電荷の場合, クーロンの 法則が成り立つ。 19₁ 192 F=k は使えないので注意。 F4 Tios450 (05659 F=m 点電荷とみなせるとき以外 ●センサー 98 界の抽象的な問題では, halo 正電荷や負電荷があると仮 =mg Han 4009 SMYS定する。 ●センサー 99 4様な電界中では, V=Ed が成り立つ。 解答| 電気力の大きさをF〔N〕, 糸の張力の大きさを すると、小球は,F, T. 重力 mgの3力でつり合う。 小球間の距離は2L〔m〕 だから, クーロンの法則より、 6.F=ko ●センサー100 クーロンの法則はクーロンが1785年に発見す (v2L) 右図より。 tan 45° mg tan 45°ko ゆえに,q=L q² (2L)2 -(C) 2mg Ro F mg 物理 問題 68 電界と電位と仕事 Tsingo=mg| 次の問いに答えよ。 V TOSPF (1) 電界の強さが2.0×105円/m の一様な電界中で,電界に沿って 0.40m だけ .com to だから, F V=2.0×10×0.40 = 8.0×10³ [V] 45° 【解答 (1) 右図のように, 電気力 線の始点に正電荷,終点に負電 荷があると考えるとわかりやす い。 求める電位差をV[V] とす ると, V=Edより T. れた2点A,B間の電位差を求めよ。 (2) 点Aより150 V だは電位が低い点Cへ, -2.0Cの点電荷をゆっくりと連 とき 外力のする仕事を求めよ。 mg 45° v2L 314 315 317 32 AL 0.40m 2.0×10'V/m 177 dは電界に沿った距離。 圃 一様な電界は,十分に大きな平行極板間などに生じる。 (2) W=q4V=g(Vc-V)より、点Cのほうの電位が低いか W=(-2.0) × (-150) - 物理 0

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TOPIC basqa robing salem of owon lerdage and boes.l Some people do one kind of job in the daytime and do a different job at night. Do you think the number of such people will increase in the future? provi moteswilnog of viole of snifrogat

黄色のマーカーの部分のsvocなどを教えていただけないでしょうか？(..)

plainly Dreaming is a universal phenomenon, though much of what we dream may be forgotten, and some few persons are able only rarely to remember their dreams on waking. The dream represents mental activity during sleep. For this reason the workings of the unconscious mind can be more p 5 seen here than anywhere else. Ordinarily the thoughts and wishes of the unconscious mind are unknown to us, though it contains the source of creative and instinctive energy. As the oldest part of the concept-forming apparatus, it makes liberal use of such primitive methods of representation as symbolism. In a very general way, the unconscious mind of present-day man may be 10 compared to the conscious mind of the caveman, and dreams often remind us of the picture writing of the caveman, where a relatively few simple pictures used as symbols told a detailed story of events. In addition, it is the function of a dream to express a wish, but since the wishes of the unconscious are often highly instinctive in nature, they would be 15 as disturbing to most modern persons as would the acts of a caveman in present-day society. Therefore, most dreams are disguised enough to conceal their true meaning from the dreamer. This is accomplished through the intervention of the conscience, a much more recently developed function of the brain. In psychoanalysis an effort to get the true meaning of the dream is 20 made by having the dreamer give all his thoughts and feelings about every element of the dream. These are then pieced together by the analyst, who uses his knowledge of the life history of the individual as a reference point. By this means, unconscious thoughts and wishes, as well as long-forgotten experiences, can be revealed so as to give the dreamer a much more complete understand- 25 ing of himself. Passage 35 Psychoanalysis ー語句と構文- 13. on waking = /17. As the oldest part of the concept-forming apparatus, it makes = それは概念を形成するための装置一式の中の一番古い部品と ・・・ 訳) / L.9. may be compared to 〜 = 〜になぞらえるこ 272 - ( CLOSE ときに目く とし 16 1027 性質を るだろ ある。 見た BO 17 わ

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I don't think it is beneficial for nakers to change jobs often. I have two reasons. In the first place, they will take a long time to get used to the Tob. If they can't do it, they will cause mistakes. In the second place, their on lautes won't be stable. When they change new job, they get tew salaries. By doing so, they won't live their life with sately about money. Therefore, they shouldn't charge Jobs often!

力の釣り合いについての質問です。Nの大きさは重力の大きさの分解によりmg sinθとなると思ったのですがどうして０になるのですか。

ve1 がいな hunga いがも 適切に かった d no en Qun 110 第1章力学 21. 斜面上の運動とエネルギー 水平面上に断面が直角三角形ABC となる三角台が固定されている。 ここに BC面から測った A 間のみ摩擦があり (小物体との間の動摩擦係数をμとする), 斜面の他の部分はなめらかである. 点の高さはんであり, ∠BAC=90°, ∠ACB = 0 である. また, 斜面 AC間の距離 1 の部分 OP 0 P A F B (1) B 点に質量 m の小物体を置き, 力Fを加えて小物体を斜面に沿ってゆっくりと A 点まで 移動させた.物体が受ける力をすべて数え上げ, BA間で各々が物体にした仕事を求めよ. ●(2) A点から初速0で小物体を滑らせた. B点を通過する時の速さはいくらか. ●(3) A点からC方向に小物体を滑らせたところ, 0 点を速さで通過し,さらにP点を通過 して滑り続けた.OP 間で小物体が受ける力をすべて数え上げ,各々が小物体にした仕事を 求めよ. (4) P点における小物体の速さはいくらか.