TOEIC・英語 大学生・専門学校生・社会人 3年弱前

英検二級のライティングです。 添削お願いします！

I think restaurants and Supermarkers should try to reduce the amount of food that they throw away. (22) because I have two reasons. To begin with, it is important to protect the environme the environment, to reduce food is good effect for forest and animals. Second. It is not lost money, If many food should throw Money is vain reducing food is good for phar sho-14 away. Pool Cost Therefore, I agree that their should try to reduce the amount of food that they throw away. (12) st 80

TOEIC・英語 大学生・専門学校生・社会人 3年以上前

英検準1級の英作文の添削をしていただきたいです。 Points Time management Flexibility Cost Communication

No. Topic: Agree or dingre.' The nmber of peaple who chosse to Work decade Caming remotely will increase in the I agree with the idea that the mumber of peaple who chose to work remotely will increase in the coming decade. I have two resons fo supput my opinicon in terms of tine management and commrunication. Fisst, people can reduce their time of commate Some people Spend a lot al time tor compmute、 t is good for thern to Work reoutely They wauld not have to in the fatune. The nunber of workplace would decrese. ge theic work ploce. Second, it is easy to Communicate each other peaple. Worbers who hove a Computer can talk with ather workers when meeting in persen is very difficat.Working remotly gerson will be very conuerient. For these reasons. I think many people will choose to work remotely in the coming decade.

TOEIC・英語 大学生・専門学校生・社会人 4年弱前

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Date No. Tapi Age or disageei People will stop subscribing to peinted. news papers in the fuature. I agre with the idea that peoplewill stop sulkstibing to printed newspapers in the tiature. I have two reasens to support my opinion. Fist it is Good for the envirenment to reduce paper. Many peaple who read nenspagers take away them they have read, s0 quantity of geboge inaease. On the other hand online news does not make garbage Also, people carn read and bring Dnline nens easier then newspapers Secand, peaple can read wlatest news on online news. Newspapers' nems is the doj's news too, but they are not latest hews, However, online news provides new news any time. It makes our lives Comvenient. It is for these reasons L think that readers of newspaper will disapear in the frnure