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英検準二級のライティングでこう書いたんですけど、おかしいでしょうか？
質問:Do you think students should learn a foreign language at school?

I think students should learn foreign language at school.I have two reasons.First,students will have chances to talk with people from abroad in the future.Second,if students learn a foreign language at school,they will think about the world.It is very important for them.In conclusion,I think students should learn a foreign language at school.