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問題
Some people say that playing sports helps children become better people.Do you agree with this opinion?
ちなみに字数は80〜100時程度です

Yes, | do.There are two reasons.First,playing sports
tells children the importance of helping each otherlf
someone of the team member cantt do best play,
the others must cover the member by playing
harderThe feeling that they must help people who
requires to help is important in theire
life.Second,playing sports is the best way to
improve theire health.Also,They can be given not
only the healthy body but also the good memories
by it .For these reasons,playing sports is the best
way for children to become better people.