Question

おもち

英作文の課題です。採点してほしいです。

Writing Activity 2
≪「中学校生活で自分がこれまでに頑張ってきたこと」 について紹介しよう! ≫

I have kept striving to improve my English
I have studying English at
I was in elementary school.
Talking with English teacher
Cram
school
since
I studied English by
using
developed my English and
English
a
computer
and so on.
As a
result
I
passed
Eiken.
I
was
50
happy.
is important things
for
life.
I
my
like English very much
50
I
want to
continue
studying it
in the
future
as well.

Answer 1

✨ Jawaban Terbaik ✨

ブドウくん

2文目
I have studying English at cram school since I was in elementary school.
間違い： have studying
修正案： have been studying ...
現在完了進行形（have + been + -ing）にする必要があります。have の直後に -ing を置くことはできません。
3文目
I studied English by talking with English teacher, using a computer, and so on.
間違い： English teacher
修正案： ... talking with an English teacher (または English teachers)

4文目
As a result, I developed my English and passed Eiken.
間違い： developed my English
修正案： improved my English skills
improveのほうが自然です。

6文目
間違い:English is important things
修正案: English is important for me
thingsは複数形だが主語Englishは単数

おもち

ありがとうございます！4文目でEnglish skillsと直してくれていますが、この作文の最初の文もmy Englishからmy English skillsに変えた方が良いでしょうか？

ブドウくん

そうですね、直したほうがいいです。

おもち

ありがとうございます！