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University students often plan for their future careers by
attending job fairs or searching online for information about different
kinds of work opportunities. There are other ways, too. Some of them
choose to join short-term work programs at companies called
internships.
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diw These have some good points. Students will be able to know
more about companies they are interested in, such as what kind of
jobs there are and what kind of people are working there. Also,
internships allow students to get to know other students. These
students can encourage each other both during and after the
internship.
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On the other hand, if students choose to join very short
internships, they may not be able to understand the job they are doing
before the internships end. Also, students who take part in internships
may find it difficult to do well in their studies.

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Answer 1

taka

全体的な構成は良く出来ていると思います。
細かい点のミスがありますが、それを修正すれば、更に良くなります。
Some university Students choose to join short-term work programs at companies called internships.
→ Some university students choose to join short-term work programs at companies called internships.
Joining internships has benefits, such as knowing more about Companies and making new friends.
→ Joining internships has benefits, such as learning more about companies and making new friends.
On the other hand, there are also disadvantages to joining internships. → 〇
For example, they may not able to understand the job or making time for study is difficult.
→ For example, students may not be able to understand the job well, or it may be difficult to make time for their studies.

参考にしてください。