Question

おもち

英検2級要約問題 添削お願いいたしますm(_ _)m
文法やスペルを見ていただけると助かります✨ポイントなども教えて欲しいです🙏

It has some benifies, such as enjoying educational videos and knowing about
School projects. Also, they fearn about cording, art, and music by on line and
improve their skills flowever, if they use it too much time, they
can lose time
To do homework and it damage their eyes. Also, becoming addict is so bad.

Answer 1

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ケビソ

by onlineを online
use it too much timeをuse it for too much time
damageをdamages
に変えればいいと思います！

おもち

ありがとうございます！5月頃に2級受け終わったのですが合格でした🌸アドバイスありがとうございます☺️