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英検2級要約問題 添削お願いいたしますm(_ _)m
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* Nowadaya, many
children
prefer to play outdoor. It has some benifies, such as
adventuring wild life as they like and being healthy to get much clean air.
However, it has some problem. For example, their parents
we have to worry
they children's safe and children may face the trouble such as bad weather,
and allergies.