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書きたい内容↓

一つ目　小説ファンに人気があるなぜなら、小説のキャラクターが動いているのをみれるからと映画が面白いか面白くないか評価できるから。

二つ目　収入も大切な要素
　　　　小説はファンに知られていて世界中で読まれて　　　　　　　いるから

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TOPIC
These days, many novels are turned into movies. Do you think the
number of such movies will increase in the future?
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Income
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I agree that number of such movies will increase in
the future.
I have two reasons
for this.
First, it is popular for novel furs to make movies
because they can
watch the charctores to move @
36 and they can
review good or bad for movie. ⑨.
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Second, income
is one of the criticle factors
The noules are finwon by fans and the holes
are read in the world.
This is
movies
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why
will increase in the future &
I belive that number of such
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