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お題は人々は将来携帯電話に更にお金をかけるかです

I think çont have two reasons. First, cell phones are so expensive. I think
it will be more expensive in the future. Second, they will buy two cell
phones For example, they are able to use bussiness or
•useful. Therefore I think people will spend more money on cell phone in the future
private. It's