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There anytime when they feel hungry. I think so. I have two
reasons. First, it is good for people who works until late at night.
They can ear dinner at midnight.
éa
desert there. They will
after
with crime
Stord
Second, brightens up
prevention.
'
They
and helps
The Town
think being safe Town is important..
Therefore, I believe staying copen 24 hours
a day is nice.'