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お題はeメールは手紙よりも良いコミュニケーション手段だと思いますか？です！

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·Yes, I think so.. I have two reasons. First, we don't have to go to
because we can send e-mail at home. Second, they need only smartphone
or PC. When we write a letter, we must prepare a pencil, card, and so on.
better means of communication than letter.
Therefore, I believes e-mail is
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