Question

おもち

どなたか助けてください🙇🏻‍♀️

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QUESTION
Do you think school lunches are good for students?

Their
are helped. Second, school lunch is
I think school lunches are good for students, I have two reasons. First
fathers or mothers don't have to make lunch for them. By this, It help By
school lunches, Many fathers or mothers
good for health. Students can ear many vegetables. Therefore, school I think
school lunches are good for students.
[No, I don't.
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Answer 1

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しゅわっちい

お母さんorお父さんのとこ、parentsでまとめていいと思います！

おもち

本当ですね！まとめます！とても助かりました🥹