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some people say that zoos are cruel and inhumane, you are opinion?
I agree with that zoos are cruel and inhumane.
I have two reasons for this.
First, Animals trapped in zoos for human entertainment are deprived of all their natural rights (freedom, family and nature).
If the situation were the other way around, it would mean that all human rights that they originally had were taken away.
Second, Humans have already developed many more humane and advanced forms of entertainment.
For example, we are inundated with sports, games, museums, the Internet, etc., but entertainment at the expense of vulnerable animals is completely unnecessary.
For there reasons, I agree with that zoos are cruel and inhumane.
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