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「中学生は新聞を毎日読むべきか。賛成か反対か」
5文程度

I agree.
I have two reasons.
First,reading newspaper can get many informations.
Second,I think that became smart.
The mind works by reading many characters.
So,I agree.

6点中何点ですか

Answer 1

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約３点
改善点↓
1. "informations"は不可算名詞なので、"information"とする
2. "I think that became smart."は文法的に不正確です。
"It can make us smarter."などと言うべきです。
3. "The mind works by reading many characters."は意味が不明瞭なので、"Reading a lot can stimulate our minds."
などと言うべきです。

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