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「中学生は携帯電話を持つべきか。賛成か反対か」
5文程度で

I agree.
That’s because we have to get on touch when we need.
For example,most junior high school students are join the club.
Smart phone is necessary to get information.
So,I agree.

6点中何点つけられますか

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Answer 1

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𝐃𝐲𝐧𝐚𝐦𝐢𝐭𝐞

6点中約3点ですね🤔

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ありがとうございます。改善点どこですか

𝐃𝐲𝐧𝐚𝐦𝐢𝐭𝐞

1. "we have to get on touch" は "we have to get in touch" に修正
2. "most junior high school students are join the club" は "most junior high school students join clubs" に修正
3. "Smart phone is necessary to get information" は "A smartphone is necessary to get information" に修正

これだと6点貰えるはずです🦤

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ありがとうございます