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Is it important to attend university? Why or why not?

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I think
Is it important to attend university? Why or why not?
Write a 60-90-word essay.
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attend university
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very fun
and
it
is important
reasons for my opinion.
First, students can make a lot of friends at university. Studying
with their friends is very good chance. to gain ability to
students.
communicate with people. Because there are
many
from various place at university, They can gain knowledge
of various culture.
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major in.
in
is
Career
For these reasons.
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students
can. study subjects which they want to
I think that studying things which I am interestedt
university makes student?
studying at
Also,
decides their lives.
I think people
go to university.
Two
people should

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Answer 1

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はい、文法的には合っています。ただし、一部の誤字やミスが見られましたので、修正します。

I think it is important to attend university. I have two reasons for my opinion. First, students can make a lot of friends at university. Studying with their friends is a very good chance to gain the ability to communicate with people. Because there are many students from various places at university, they can gain knowledge of various cultures. Second, students can study subjects they want to major in. I think that studying things I am interested in is very fun. Also, studying at university shapes students' careers and helps them decide their lives. For these reasons, I believe people should go to university.

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