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I don't think people's salaries shall
be based on their job
pertamance. I have two reasurs.
In the first place, everyone
have different skills. Many people
don't always work well, so
It is no equal. In
the second place, if it be
be hused on their age,
itt's can be said to
be equal. Mart geople get
More
a family on they get
older, so they need money.
Therefore, I think it is
bad for people to have
their salaries besed on their
job performance.

Should people's salaries be based on their job performance?
POINTS
- Company profits
<-Motivation
Stills