Question

FH

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I
I first time
whenever
get up
must
examine if somebody sends message for me or
really lite
I
online for
a day, it's
But
1
think
it's
of time. I
example, research material, important information.
The
convenienies, but
hope
get too addicted to
hurt yourself.
.
to
DATE
so important
bed, hurt
go
online
NO.
take the phone
calls
play social media. I feel bed when I'm not
to
me.
me, then
the eyes and
waste
again when I need it. For
still
Internet has brought many
the internet though, be careful you will

Answer 1

Yoyo

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FH

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