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質問です。
私が書いた文で、なにか訂正はありますか?
もしあったら、理由を含め教えて頂きたいです!!!
宜しくお願いします。

課題 (1) Your story should begin with this sentence: One day Mr. and Mrs. Ito were talking about selling some things at a flea market. She Maybe we can sell this computer, too. He thinking that The next day at the market, of things One day, Mr. and Mrs. Ito were talking about selling some things at a flea market. She said "Maybe teo, to him. He was was miting prices was deaning He That afternoon, The next day at the market was some B we can sell this We can it Some things to sell computer T That afternoon She noticed it had been rained. thinking that we should move the ¥20,000 to sell to some small square paper. computer in their car

課題 (2) Your story should begin with this sentence: One day, Mr. and Mrs. Okuda were talking in their living room. We should prepare food for a disaster. Later at a supermarket One day, Mr. and Mrs. Okuda were talking in their living room. He said "We should food for a disaster." to her. She was Later at a supermarket, He took water bottles in basket. many She said that We should take a cart here." to he. On the way home, prepare listening to this word. was He She said that " Let's take a taxi. On the way home thinking hard bringing plastic beg..

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(1)
2文目のwe can it を、we could do it にした方がいいです。まずcanの後は必ず動詞がきます。そして時制の一致のルールで、canをcouldに変えます。
5文目のit has been rainedを　it started rainingに変えた方がいいです。状況としては、作業をしていたら、雨が降り「始めた」のでstartを使います。もちろんstartの後はing形なのでrainingにします。　it has been rainedだと雨が降っていたという文になり、写真の状況に合いません。

(2)
2文目は単純にshe agreed with his idea.とかで大丈夫です。むしろこっちの方が定型表現です。
3文目はin basket ではなく、in a basket です。冠詞に気をつけましょう。
4文目は、to heではなく to him ですね。toの後は目的格がくる(I my me mineでいうところの3つ目)ので気を付けて下さい
5文目は、thinking hard ではなく、thinking it hardの方がいいです。thinkは第五文型を取れるので、OCを続けます。Oが長いため、itを置いてCの後に本物のOを持ってきます。

このくらいだと思います。問題を見るに、英検の2次試験だと思います(多分2級？)。
またわからないところがあったらぜひ聞いてください！