Question

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TOPIC
Today, some people buy products that are good
for the environment. Do you think buying such
products will become more common in the
future?
POINTS
●
Changing lifestyles
Cost
• Technology

I think buying such products will become more
in the future.
I have two
why I think
To begin with our
our lifestyles change by such products.
For example, I feel
Save
environment
will become
a
when I
more
In addition, technology advance
If scientists develop
in Earth.
hery
eat
Common
For these reasons
reasons
sense of belonging people who
machine
a
common
in the future.
50.
chocolate without ail of plants.
in the future:
, it may solve several problems
I think buying such products

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