Question

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英作文なんですけれど、何か訂正やアドバイスが欲しいです🙇🏻‍♀️

If
you
will be
an animal, what do
I want to be a
I
you
want to be?
a bird.
want to fly freely in the sky.
I can see beautiful biew from the sky and
enjoy flying around the world.
I think it is very excited.

Answer 1

わたあめ

アドバイスではないのですが、
beautiful biew ではなくbeautiful view だと思います！