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とある人のことを紹介する文なのですが、ほとんどの文がHe~になってしまいます。あと文法間違いなどあったら教えてください！

Then, I'll tell you about his favorite things.
He likes railroads
He especially wants to rido JNR
He likes
189 series.
His hopey is playing chess.
Yamen
Flis hated food is mushroom
weak nesses
He is trying hard to overcome his weal