Question

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Date
I think Increase peoples to do internet shopping,
there are two reasons to support this idea.
For the first reason
Internet shopping is very convenient.
If I have no time go shopping, I can buy thing fast i
For the second reason
P
Internet shopping can buy whenever I want...
things.
to put it another way.
I can
buy free times,
On the other hand, Shopping isn't open in the night;
So
I think that shopping isn't convenient,
For there reasons. I think increase peoples to do
internet shopping,

TOPIC
These days, some people buy things on the Internet. Do you
think more people will do so in the future?
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