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凛

英検準2級の英作文です。
添削お願いします🙏🙏

& Do you think there should be more sports
programs on TV?
Yes, I think so, I have two reasons,
First, if we get more chances
To watch
on TV,
a
Sports Programs
lot of people will become interested in sports.
Playing sports give us a healthy body.
Second,
we can know not only major sports but also
not famous sports.
So many sports will beome popular.

英検

Answer 1

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Keith

４行目　give→gives（主語がPlayingで３単現）
４行目　a healthy body→healthy bodies
最後　becomeのスペルミス
こんなところでしょうか？

Keith

Playing sports makes us healthy.（スポーツをすることは私たちを健康にする／スポーツをすることで私たちは健康になる）
でもいいかもしれません。

凛

ありがとうございます🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️