Question

あずき🐾

英文描きました。添削お願いします🤲

I strongly believe that students should take part in club activities.
One reason is that you can engage with different people.
Actually ,when I was in the art club,I could meet a lot of nice people.
The other reason is that you can become healthier. For example, if you join the sports club, you will exercise every day.
In conclusion it is good to take part in club activities.

Answer 1

みう

添削しなくてもいいくらいめちゃくちゃいい英文だと思います👀

最初の文も大文字になってるし！