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Some people say that people today should spend less time using the Internet . Do you agree with this opinion? がtopic です。

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I agree with the opinioh
less, time. Usthg the Internet
I have tho feasons or that.
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hey., will not (play outaide
Thealth et to
Secord, using Iherhet too lauch time mafes their apmchica tiah
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pople
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I think that people oght ho to use Intethet
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